User talk:Logan Snyder/sandbox

Dear Logan, You got your article selections for area and sector started, but still need an evaluation. Check out your peer, Nick Allen's, or my sandbox for a template of what the evaluation should look like. -Momo Sumomox4nouchi (talk) 00:23, 8 February 2019 (UTC)sumomox4nouchi

McCalister Russell's Peer Review
Hi Logan, I see that you have some excellent sources on your wikipedia page. I am wondering if you would be able to use some of those to further develop your drafting. Have you considered using the Kalugina article to develop some of the history of housing initiatives in San Francisco? That may be something you could contribute to either page since both don't have a history section. It's great that you are choosing to edit pages that need more information. Maybe put some more concrete examples of your drafting in the sandbox so that it will be ready to move over to the Wikipedia articles. Lastly, maybe include the note above your drafting section that you shared with me via email that the parts you plan on putting on the Wikipedia pages are in bold. Since you also include a bit of information giving context for your edits which is great so it gives the reader more clarity on your thought process - this could also be included in the summarizing and synthesizing if you wanted to distinguish more between the two. I am excited to see more content on your sandbox as you develop what you will have to add to your selected wikipedia articles! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Mcrussell11 (talk • contribs) 00:25, 10 April 2019 (UTC)

References Heading
Hi Logan, make sure to add a References heading to the bottom of your sandbox so your drafting citations have a home once you start that process. Thanks. Sumomox4nouchi (talk) 19:05, 14 April 2019 (UTC)sumomox4nouchi