User talk:Loganallen97/sandbox

Hi Logan,

Your article needs some work. Kairyth (talk) 17:54, 6 April 2016 (UTC)
 * Word count continues to be very low, even counting the image (you only get one = 200 words).
 * Citations need to be more than just links - since you will be integrating your work into a fairly well-established article, you need to include all of the details (author, title, date, etc) in a style that matches the real article. Ex: Deletant, Dennis (1995). Ceauşescu and the Securitate: coercion and dissent in Romania, 1965–1989. pp. 29–33. ISBN 978-1-56324-633-3.
 * Neutrality is still a problem - "to add insult to injury" is not neutral, nor is "a precedence of political decisions taking the place of commonsense". Please make a note of what I marked up on your first draft where inline citations were needed and neutrality was flagged. If you don't make changes based on my comments, you'll lose a lot of points on the final assignment.