User talk:Lokio2021

Welcome!
Hello, Lokio2021, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with Wiki Education; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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Moved Data Power to Sandbox
Hi, I moved your article back to your sandbox at User:Lokio2021/Data Power because it is not ready for mainspace for several reasons.

Writing Style & Format: Currently, the content reads and is formatted like an essay, which is fine for other assignments in your course but not for Wikipedia. Remember, the goal is to provide a neutral, fact based summary of the topic at hand, not to persuade the readers. I recommend reading over pgs. 7-9 of Editing Wikipedia before you rewrite to check out some examples of what is appropriate prose for Wikipedia.

References: Wikipedia is not a place to publish your ideas or conclusions about a topic. That’s considered “original research.” "No original research" means your writing for Wikipedia will summarize what other people have said about a topic you’re interested in, so that a Wikipedia reader can get an overview of the current thoughts and understanding of that topic. I recommend you find a couple more reliable sources from journals or trustworthy news coverage to provide a well balanced summary of facts on data power. You have a solid foundation to work off, just need to implement the feedback. If you have any questions, feel free to reach out. Brianda (Wiki Ed) (talk) 23:07, 18 November 2022 (UTC)