User talk:Lokoots

Hey, I'm looking over the Avoice page and fixing what I can. I made some edits to the lead (like removing the tm sign, generally considered bad style and flags an article as an advert to many editors).

What I consider you do is to turn the article into prose-style. Currently, it's a bit of a list. The sub-headers under Background can probably be removed and all the text added into a para or two. This will help a great deal. Same goes for Current exhibits. That should clear anything up :-) Xavexgoem (talk) 00:53, 14 August 2008 (UTC)

Proposed deletion of Avoice: African American Voices in Congress
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