User talk:Loksmythe/Archives/2020/July

Request on 21:09:48, 3 July 2020 for assistance on AfC submission by Deltagammaz
Thanks for reviewing my request.

Could you give me some more info on how my draft is "written like an ad"?

I also do not understand how it does not qualify for a wikipedia article. Any more info on that would be greatly appreciated.

Happy to make any necessary changes.

Looking forward to your feedback.

Deltagammaz (talk) 21:09, 3 July 2020 (UTC)

Axis Asset Management Company
Hello, Thank you for your review of the Axis Asset Management Company. I see that you have Axis Asset Management Company with Axis Bank but they are different companies. I have added the details of Axis Asset Management Company in the original article. Do you think it is appropriate to merge Axis Asset Management Company and Axis Banks. Ta! Checkright (talk) 18:43, 8 July 2020 (UTC)

Please revert
I thought we were done with this. Please revert Thank you. --Hipal/Ronz (talk) 15:17, 9 July 2020 (UTC)
 * Are we done now? --Hipal/Ronz (talk) 16:08, 10 July 2020 (UTC)

Draft:STUDIO Urbanism
Hi @Loksmythe ! Thanks for reviewing my article but I have a few questions to improve it and make it approved! The content of the article I wrote is from the Editor (who is a Reliable source) and supported by other sector publications which talk about STUDIO Urbanism and its cultural project: as you can see in the bibliography part (Zero Undici Più, Jul 2019 ; Archdaily, Jul 2016 ; World Architecture COMMUNITY, Jan 2015, )

Then the structure (Bibliography, see also, references and external links) follow the standard of wikipedia as other articles of the same typology: https://it.wikipedia.org/wiki/Casabella, https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Domus_(magazine) , https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Abitare

Please help me with this article and let me make it published, it's interesting and full of cultural content! Thanks a lot!!! Achille18 (talk) 12:07, 10 July 2020 (UTC)

PHYNE
Hi Loksmythe,

I have already tried to contact you here: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:WikiProject_Articles_for_creation/Help_desk

I just wanted to ask how I can improve my sources for coming articles? I would really enjoying researching and writing articles, but I'm not sure what I've done wrong with the sources... Beforehand I looked at streetwear Brands such as Supreme, Off White, etc. and they use similar sources as mine.

Kind regards Juergen — Preceding unsigned comment added by JuergenDoran (talk • contribs) 08:46, 14 July 2020 (UTC)
 * Please review WP:RS. The subject, Draft:PHYNE, simply does not fulfill WP:NCORP. Loksmythe (talk) 15:05, 16 July 2020 (UTC)

Request on 21:35:38, 14 July 2020 for assistance on AfC submission by Tonyockbud
Tonyockbud (talk) 21:35, 14 July 2020 (UTC)

I believe the article I submitted does meet the guidelines as it has references from a major magazine in NY and other published articles that the source topic published. In fact the only reason I was submitting the article was because he is an Actor and a Security expert I met on the set of a feature film that he was consulting fo.
 * So it sounds like you have an undeclared WP:COI then. And from the sources provided he does not fulfill the criteria for Notability (people). Loksmythe (talk) 14:58, 16 July 2020 (UTC)

Request for help since the article got deleted
Hello. I am a chef and a writer and I had written my first article on Wikipedia and it got deleted. I would like to request to help me in editing the draft again before i submit it further. If any statement in the article seems to be unambiguous or not worthy, please help me in correcting. Thank you. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Abhianand25 (talk • contribs) 15:21, 17 July 2020 (UTC)

Hi! Can you please answer me? STUDIO Urbanism
Hi @Loksmythe, Thanks for your answer! As you can see I simplify the article to follow Wikipedia Standars.

I think that the bibliography helps the wikipedia users to better understand STUDIO's contents and to create a discussion on Urbanism. If you think that some articles are not good to explain these concepts, I can delete them. If you think there too many articles, I can delete the oldest ones.

Please help me with this article and let me make it published, it's interesting and full of cultural content! Thanks a lot!!! Achille18

Waiting for your reply. Achille18 (talk) 14:53, 23 July 2020 (UTC)