User talk:Lolliolivia

April 2017
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Feedback
Hi. I took a look at your sandbox, but I'm not sure what sort of feedback you're interested in - your draft seems in a very preliminary state. Am I correct in assuming that you're planning to contribute to the disc golf article? Is there a specific part of the article you plan to expand?

Remember that the role of a Wikipedia article is to summarize what reliable sources say about the topic. It also isn't supposed to speak directly to the reader - if you use the first or second person, you probably have the tone wrong. I have attaching a link to the Editing Wikipedia brochure - I recommend that you take a close look at it to get a better sense of what you should be aiming for. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 18:42, 26 April 2017 (UTC)