User talk:London1937

Welcome!
Hello, London1937, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Brianda and I work with Wiki Education; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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Rhapsody in Two Languages draft
Hi @London1937, Well done on your draft for improving the Rhapsody in Two Languages article. A couple of things:
 * I moved your sandbox page to User:London1937/Rhapsody in Two Languages. This way you can easily access the page from the dashboard home page, under the My article section, below the article topic title by clicking on the link, "Sandbox draft".
 * I like how you differentiated between the existing article and your text. Currently you have your citations like this [2], rather than formatted as a formal citation. I recommend you go back and add the citations through the citation button on the sandbox page. You can see that I added a citation as an example of this in the first sentence of your contribution. Here's the tutorial on adding citations, in case you need a refresher.
 * When your work is finalized, and you feel ready to move your edits to the existing article, check out this video on adding to an existing article. It has some good reminders and tips for adding your work.

Any questions, please feel free to reach out. Looping in @Liroel. Brianda (Wiki Ed) (talk) 22:27, 17 October 2023 (UTC)


 * Hi Brianda thanks so much for helping me move my sandbox page! I couldn't figure out where to put this draft in the correct place at first, so I truly appreciate your help! Also, thanks for the direct links to the tutorials and for the helpful tips! 2A02:C7C:F00E:7E00:79E9:E4F:1683:6DA0 (talk) 22:43, 30 October 2023 (UTC)