User talk:Loneoso/sandbox

Which article are you reviewing?

List of Tollways in Texas as edited by Loneoso

'''Does the lead section summarize the article's key points? What are the key points of the article as you understand them?'''

Yes, the lead section offers a well understood breakdown of the article as a whole. The key points are essentially the reasoning behind the construction of tollroads as well as their supplemental use.

'''Is the article's structure clear? Does the group plan to use headings and subheadings, images and diagrams at appropriate place?'''

It appeared to me as though the article was structured and segmented extremely well, leaving plenty of differentiation between points.

'''How well balanced is the coverage? Are sections overly long or short in proportion to their importance.'''

The main section could be a bit shorter and to the point, however for the amount of information it is incredibly necessary and well balanced.

'''Is the language appropriate? Do the authors use generalized language?'''

All language is perfectly appropriate. The use of words such as some and many are non-existent in this article. The article reads as a professional article.

Does the article contain unsourced opinions?

No, the article is perfectly cited and sourced.

'''Are the references reliable? And are there enough?'''

All of the sources are 100% reliable coming from easily verifiable sources. The amount of sources is perfect. Everything written is perfectly cited.

Rating

I would rate the progress of this page at a 5

Favorite part of the article

I really appreciate the organization of the article and how it now flows much more fluidly.

2 improvements that I would make to the article 1. I would add visual aids throughout the article 2. I would offer more links to other pages

How would such improvements improve the quality?

The visual aids would grab attention more and the links would broaden the context of the article.

Additional comments

Fantastic job on the article!

Nickapplewhite (talk) 21:42, 28 November 2014 (UTC)Nick

Peer Review
What article are you reviewing? List of Tollways in Texas

Does the lead section summarize the article's key points? What are the key points of the article as you understand them? Yes it does, and the key points are 1. Texas doesn't have many taxes on gas, 2. how Texas has to make up for this revenue loss by building roads that charge people every time they drive on it.

Is the article's structure clear? Does the group plan to use headings and subheadings, images and diagrams at appropriate place? Yes the article is clear and I am not sure if the group plans to do that.

How well balanced is the coverage? Are sections overly long or short in proportion to their importance? The balance of the coverage is on point!

Is the language appropriate? Do the authors use generalized language? The authors use professional and clear language? The language is appropriate and professional.

Does the article contain non-sourced opinions or value statements? I didn't see any value statements but possibly a little opinion. Hard to tell.

Are the references reliable? And are there enough? The references seem legit to me, Yes there are enough resources. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Neepanator (talk • contribs) 05:51, 3 December 2014 (UTC)