User talk:Lonerboy

Pepper Potts
Hi. Welcome to Wikipedia, and thanks for working to improve the site with your edits to Pepper Potts, as we really appreciate your participation. However, the edits had to be reverted, because Wikipedia cannot accept unsourced material or original research. This includes material lacking cited sources, or obtained through personal knowledge or unpublished synthesis of previously published material or which constitutes speculation or synthesis on the part of the editor. Wikipedia requires that the material in its articles be accompanied by reliable, verifiable (usually secondary) sources explicitly cited in the text in the form of an inline citation, which you can learn to make here. Although there are sources cited for Paltrow's appearance in the film, and have been for some time, they do not support any material regarding Potts' acquisition of armor, nor did you include any at the end of the passage you added.

Also, the appearance of the character in the recent live-action films, including Iron Man 3, is already mentioned in the paragraph above the one you created. A separate paragraph solely for the trailers for that film is not warranted.

Also, a minor point: Wikipedia does not employ ordinal suffixes in the writing of dates, as indicated by WP:DATESNO.

If you have any other questions about editing, or need help regarding the site's policies, just let me know by leaving a message for me in a new section at the bottom of my talk page. Thanks. :-) Nightscream (talk) 22:24, 24 October 2012 (UTC)