User talk:Lookwhatimook/No scalpel vasectomy

you indicated that you wanted to update the refs. Looks like one ref was updated, but then you added in another ref from 2004, which is quite old for medical articles on Wikipedia. The preference is for reviews from the last 5 years. I would see if you could find something more current to cite. It looks like you haven't made an attempt to rewrite the last two sentences of the lead. Do you plan on leaving them alone or removing them? If you plan on removing them, you'll want to make sure you leave a rationale in your edit summary.

Overall this is a fairly low-quality article, so any improvements you can make to it would be greatly appreciated! Elysia (Wiki Ed) (talk) 21:10, 3 April 2020 (UTC)