User talk:Lopez0124/sandbox

Good information and organization. For the sentence "During these rituals the aboriginals created..." I would suggest some phrasing changes to make it more straigtforward and easy to read. Sylipen (talk) 20:07, 25 March 2019 (UTC)

Your info seemed very complete and was really interesting. The only comment I have is that I saw one or two punctuation errors. Keep up the good work!Maddyz1415 (talk) 01:19, 14 March 2019 (UTC)

Since I'm in your group, looking really good. I like that you brought in the x-ray styles into the rituals and beliefs. Looks like the article is going be a lot better with our info. added. great job. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Cozzia234 (talk • contribs) 19:13, 20 March 2019 (UTC)