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Your submission at Articles for creation: Sehba Musharraf (February 7)
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Dan arndt (talk) 07:20, 7 February 2023 (UTC)


 * @User:Dan arndt you said wrong. She passes Notability (politics) which says the person is notable if "The person is the monogamous spouse or life partner of a national head of state in any country.". For reference you can see this and for your information I am also an Wikipedia:AfC reviewer. ​​​​​​​𝐋𝐨𝐫𝐝𝐕𝐨𝐥𝐝𝐞𝐦𝐨𝐫𝐭𝟕𝟐𝟖🧙‍♂️Let's Talk ! 07:31, 7 February 2023 (UTC)


 * Acknowledge your comments - my view is that the article should at minimum address the requirements of WP:ANYBIO. Noting that your second reference doesn't state the page number in the book. The third reference simply states "attended by the first lady of Pakistan, Sehba Mushraaf". The first reference at least gives a little more coverage than her name. Given her position I think you could come up with a little more biography in reputable secondary sources at least. Dan arndt (talk) 07:45, 7 February 2023 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Sehba Musharraf (February 7)
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KylieTastic (talk) 08:33, 7 February 2023 (UTC)