User talk:LorenzoPetrella/sandbox

Review
Very good work! Gabrieledef96 (talk) 13:27, 11 December 2019 (UTC)

Good improvement! does "Jpnes 1981" refers to the person and the year that Riftia was named? Adjust your dots and comas in the text "eg: .(98um)". Make sure you insert a citation at the end of a sentence/dot mark, even if your entire paragraph was based on a single source, break it down and place the citation twice. Add also links along with your text, this might make easy to laypeople in this matter, to smoothly enjoy the knowledge. The last, overall your edition to the Riftia article, you could add some threats that might "threat" the existence of this animal (Destruction of H. vents by mining. climate change, etc). --D&#39;Catarina (talk) 17:11, 12 December 2019 (UTC)D'Catarina

Hi Lorenzo! I' ve read your article and it is a very good work! I just suggest you to add the links. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Emanuela Di Lecce (talk • contribs) 14:45, 20 December 2019 (UTC)

Hi Lorenzo, I read your article and I really appreciated it, it is full of references and all the passages are clear, good job! Flavia Caccaviello (talk) 17:11, 21 December 2019 (UTC)