User talk:LorongL

March 2013
Please do not add commentary or your own personal analysis to Wikipedia articles, as you did to Philip Egan. Doing so violates Wikipedia's neutral point of view policy and breaches the formal tone expected in an encyclopedia. Thank you. Your additions were inadequately sourced and used non-neutral language, which is not permissible, especially in a biography of a living person. Elizium23 (talk) 01:46, 24 March 2013 (UTC)

Please do not remove content or templates from pages on Wikipedia, as you did to Philip Egan, without giving a valid reason for the removal in the edit summary. Your content removal does not appear constructive and has been reverted. Please make use of the sandbox if you'd like to experiment with test edits. Thank you. Elizium23 (talk) 23:21, 24 March 2013 (UTC)