User talk:Lostautumn

Chzz
Hi there.

I'm working on this, please hold on a bit. I'll answer more, here, within 30 minutes. Thanks,  Chzz  ► 22:59, 11 February 2011 (UTC)

Lostautunm, having looked at the article, my advice is to copy it to your user-space, work on it there, and - if/when you can fix the problems with it - to ask for it to be made live.

Problems currently include;


 * Lack of references for all facts; for example, Andrew James Schorr (born September 28, 1950) - where can we check that? best known as the founder of HealthTalk - who says he is 'best known' for that? founder and host of Patient Power ...and so on
 * References are to "everydayhealth.com" and the blog on that site. At best, this is a primary source. A blog is certainly not a reliable source

All facts need to be verifiable in a reliable source.

A lot of things need fixing, in particular to conform with our policy regarding biographies of living people - therefore, I am (below) going to ask an administrator to move this article into your user-space, where you can work on it.

If you can try to fix the issues, please put right here, on your own user talk page, and we'll help.

Best,  Chzz  ► 23:10, 11 February 2011 (UTC)

 Chzz  ► 23:10, 11 February 2011 (UTC)
 * ✅ User:Lostautumn/Andrew Schorr  Ron h jones (Talk) 23:18, 11 February 2011 (UTC)


 * Superb; thanks, Ronhjones.
 * So, Lostautum, I now suggest you edit that page - User:Lostautumn/Andrew Schorr - and work on the references, and the other points I mentioned. It'd also help if you edited other articles -to learn more about Wikipedia, and avoid being labelled a single-purpose account.
 * Use another here, on your own page, for further help. Best of luck,  Chzz  ►  23:22, 11 February 2011 (UTC)