User talk:Lozmeister

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CHM437
Hey Lozmeister, it seems like we have similar articles dealing with analytical sensors. It would be super cool if you included a picture of the compounds that you are talking about in your article. Furthermore, you can add a section on the instruments needs to detect small molecules and possibly include the manufacturers as well. I guess Jablonski diagrams are always in vogue when dealing with fluorescence. Finally, a historical section would be amazing. Cheers mate. Rahman437 (talk) 23:04, 2 March 2015 (UTC)

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Hi Lozmeister. Nice work on your draft article. I just had two minor comments. We generally don't capitalize article titles unless they are proper nouns, so you would probably want to format the article title as "Small molecule sensors" rather than "Small Molecule Sensors". The same is true for the section headers. Minor, but worth bearing in mind. The other issue, also very minor, is that by convention in Wikipedia, references go after punctuation, not before. You should have something that looks like .[1][2] rather than [1][2].

Again, nice work on your draft. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 19:47, 18 March 2015 (UTC)

'Response' Thank you very much Ian! I will make the changes, its just for now my Professor is marking my article and I don't want to make any more changes after the deadline as this would be unfair. Thanks a lot Lozmeister (talk) 20:14, 18 March 2015 (UTC)