User talk:Lperkins5825/sandbox

Logan, this is great! You've found some very reputable sources and search engines, have a great outline for what you want to do, and a very interesting topic to go off of. Personally, I like when there are a lot of headings in a wiki page, because it makes it easier to find what I am looking for, however, I agree that there are a lot and I think that decreasing the amount of headings and creating sub headings is the way to go. There are a lot of sources for this page, it might be worth checking out what sources they used? Patton.gillian (talk) 12:20, 6 October 2020 (UTC)Gillian

2nd Peer Review: Your draft looks really good! I think that your idea of merging some sections together makes sense and your plan on adding the importance of some sites mentioned in the article is a good choice. Overall, what you have (and your plans) are well thought out and will make the article more organized. Can't wait to read your article in the future! Bobadillag (talk) 15:08, 12 October 2020 (UTC)

Hi Logan, I agree with your reviewers that you've done a lot of good work thus far. A few specific comments: - I agree with most of your decisions, i.e. we can ignore non-Omani sites, once you introduce UAE as an abbreviation keep using it, condensing the sections, etc. - Make sure that you get dates (with a citation) into the different sections, esp. since it seems to have gotten deleted from the Copper Age - The final, Islamic Age section seems a ripe one for your expansion, especially since they seem to contradict themselves by saying there isn't much and then immediately referencing hundreds of smelting sites MP — Preceding unsigned comment added by Bwana Msitu (talk • contribs) 19:55, 12 October 2020 (UTC)