User talk:LrnzMoretti/sandbox

Feedback on draft
I think the article is generally well written, I have made some minor edits - but I think you could work a bit more to make the language less complex, remember this is an encyclopedia. You also need to insert references otherwise it will not be accepted on Wikipedia. So for all the information you give about her you should cite sources (on the video Marco shows how to do this ), also when you refer to her work and research interests you should include citations - even to her work but not only. For the list of her publications, it may be best to limit it to selected publications, but see also the format used in other Wikipedia articles about academics - here's an example Judith Butler

Calfux22 (talk) 12:19, 21 November 2022 (UTC)