User talk:Lsheban/sandbox

Syntactically
The first paragraph seems very choppy with short sentences. So sentence such as "In today’s society there is a greater divide between the community and the police" could probably add to it to make it flow. I think citations could be improved in the way they are referenced in your article, where you could be more relying on wikipedias built in format and cleaning up some oddities (Unnecessary double citation: Bell [2](2018) describes several de-escalation practices to assist in a potentially violent situation. [2])

The organization of how the facts presented is pretty good. Your sources seemed good, but may need some cleaning up.

Overall
This has good information and sources.

--AviSOCL (talk) 15:40, 18 November 2019 (UTC)