User talk:Lstockington/Iowa Writers' Workshop/Laurenen2004 Peer Review

Review
Comments:

- Good work on the methodology, I think it's an important part of the article that was missing and it clears up a lot of things now that you've incorporated it

- I think there are some very small grammar mistakes that once fixed would make the flow of this paragraph a lot stronger

- I also think the manner in which you write about the Iowa Writer's Workshop is very positive, but it may help make your article stronger or more unbiased if this section didn't portray the work shop in such an appraising light. It may be helpful to include information that displays some negative or not entirely positive review of the workshop despite it being an extremely revered program. Laurenen2004 (talk) 18:16, 7 November 2023 (UTC)