User talk:LubnaTahtamouni/sandbox

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Hi ,

This is a great start on your article! I have a few recommendations mostly about tone below: Will (Wiki Ed) (talk) 16:36, 26 October 2020 (UTC)
 * In the lead I would have a sentence that details what she researches. I would phrase it like "Lee is an NIH Lasker researchers who studies..." You do include this information, but readers will appreciate those specifics in the very first sentence
 * I would create a heading for the second paragraph titled "Research" or "Career"
 * In any of your sources, do they mention where she went to school? That would be great to include in this article
 * I really like how clearly you frame her research in the second paragraph. That's great!
 * The dates in the references are currently broken (the red part). If you have questions about how to fix that, let me know! This is a really common thing to break and is easy to fix