User talk:Lucky Wilbury123/sandbox

This is in current article "This article is about the concept in disease ecology. For other uses, see Reservoir (disambiguation)." Be sure it is in your final draft--RJBazell (talk) 16:13, 25 October 2018 (UTC)

Helen's Peer Review
You might want to add a lead to the article which might define what a natural reservoir is and gives a quick overview. You have great information but a Wikipedia user might want to quickly glance at a basic definition. I think that your article is well organized. The flow from categorization to examples to disease is good in my opinion. The content is neutral and the sources seem accurate. Maybe you could add a bit about how diseases flow from animals to humans. Overall, this is very informative and well researched.

TaylorHabb's Peer Review
This is excellent! Suggestions: Consider adding one more sentence under "human reservoirs" and "mice reservoirs" if possible; avoid repetition in the "bat reservoirs" portion (the phrase "so many" is used multiple times) Overall, the formatting is great- a clear outline is visible and it is easy to follow. TaylorHabb (talk) 14:04, 30 October 2018 (UTC)

Moved draft
You had moved your draft to main article space under the name Lucky Wilbury123/sandbox which was obviously wrong. There someone had requested deletion. Instead I have moved it back to your user space. Best wishes. Thincat (talk) 12:19, 11 November 2018 (UTC)