User talk:LukeShort2/2011 stock market crash

I would try to blend these two sentences below as the second sentence on its own is a fragment.

“ Investors were moving their money to Treasury bonds to increase the security of their investments. Which led to the European Central Bank trying to recover the stock market drop which was unsuccessful. “

It would also be a bit useful to understand what facts you're presenting caused the stock market crash and what were responses to it. As things are presented now it seems to all be the same but maybe a bit of clarification with responses at the end would help.