User talk:Luke gagnon/sandbox

MECH 2960 Instructor Review
I apologize that I didn't get to review your article earlier. But overall you've done a great job getting a completely new article off the ground!

Here are a few comments I would have:
 * For the first sentence, it reads "Sand composites, most commonly sand reinforced polyester composites (SPCs), involve a building material with sand acting as reinforcement in the composite." I would say you might wish to say "Sand composites, most commonly referred to as sand-reinforced polyester composites (SPCs), are a building material in which sand acts as a reinforcement in the composite."  It's a slightly more precise definition, and will make it read great!
 * business men should be one word "businessmen"
 * the ending of "and was in obtaining." is a little awkward. Consider rephrasing?
 * For the composition, I was hoping to know more about the composition of the composites, rather than just the sand. For much of that information you could provide a link somewhere to the wikipedia article on sand.
 * Do you know about for instance the volume fraction or weight fraction of sand that's put in the polyester? Anything about the polyester?
 * For the preparation, do you mean the manufacturing of SPCs? Maybe change the title of the section to be "Manufacturing".  Instead of a bulleted list, could you make it into a paragraph/prose format?
 * What does the bullet "mixing with alternate material(s)" mean? I'm a little lost on that bullet
 * For the compression strength bullet, "sand" doesn't need to be capitalized
 * I know you're probably just wanting to end the article, but if I were to add one other section, it would be "Uses". If you had one example of where it was used, you could then enter it there.
 * Great citations, especially the journal article!

UML MECH2960 (talk) 21:21, 13 December 2018 (UTC)