User talk:Lukepat/sandbox

Good Sources
It looks like you found a great deal of sources to use. Try making them into complete thoughts. UniversityofCincinnatiStudent (talk) 16:04, 22 October 2018 (UTC)

Peer Editing
I looked back to your article to edit, https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Consumer-to-business, and there isn't any sources cited. Seeing that you have quite a few, I'd suggest reviewing the article and if you have any overlapping information, simply cite it. This would be a MAJOR contribution. Any picture would be attributable to the article, because the topic is very open to the reader for interpretation. Still, if you are to add to the article, try to make complete thoughts out of all the sources you've used. The research for the article is there, you just need to apply it now to the article itself. Good Job! UniversityofCincinnatiStudent (talk) 16:00, 24 October 2018 (UTC)

I added complete sentences and thoughts. Organized through subsections. I am going to cite information on the article because that would be a MAJOR contribution thank you! Lukepat (talk) 16:02, 26 October 2018 (UTC)

You have a nice amount of information in your sandbox, and you have all 5 of your sources in there too. I think you could briefly talk about B2B and B2C to show the differences that they have compared to consumer-to-business. You could add different subsections on the page because it doesn't seem like te page is that organized right now. You could make the page much more organized by clearly writing the information in the subsection. I think that with the information that you have, you'll be able to write a lot about this topic.Mehtaas (talk) 16:05, 24 October 2018 (UTC)

I added a whole section dedicated to talking about the differences between C2B and traditional business models.Lukepat (talk) 16:02, 26 October 2018 (UTC)

Adding pictures to your Wikipedia page would be helpful. You have good information in your sandbox, but the info is not organized. so you need to divide your information into different subtopics. Good use of footnote to link the information back to the source. I think you can improve your article by adding hyperlinks that link to other Wikipedia page. With specific vocabulary it is important to explain those term. Leungpl (talk) 19:55, 25 October 2018 (UTC)

I added subsections and organized my overall content a lot better. Thanks for the suggestion! Lukepat (talk) 16:02, 26 October 2018 (UTC)