User talk:LuluThrower/sandbox

Hi Lulu:

Gotta give you props for starting a page from scratch on a guy that is hard to find info about!

Here are some of my suggestions: 1) Your reference in the first section "Paul Willis" is still broken, as it shows up as ""

2) Paul Willis' Work is widely read in the fields of sociology, anthropology, and education, his work emphasizing consumer culture, socialization, music,and popular culture.
 * lower case "w?"
 * I think that should be it's own sentence, OR moved to the beginning of the sentence right after "work" >> "Willis' work, which emphasizes consumer culture, socialization, music,and popular culture, is widely read..."

3) Not sure what the "outline" section is for [unless you have already fleshed sections out and removed it from a previous list you had]

4) "An Englishman’s Home Is His Castle? A Response to Paul Willis’s Unemployment: The Final Inequality"
 * Did you mean for that to be in a box?

5) Maybe throw in a picture of him

6) Perhaps you can link to his page on the Princeton page http://www.princeton.edu/sociology/faculty/willis/ as a reference to him working there. --Keyohful (talk) 19:41, 21 November 2011 (UTC)