User talk:Lulutao/sandbox

Response to peer reviews
Aileen's response: I definitely agree with Henry's comment that we can add more historical context to the 2017 Women's March since it is very bare right now. We will add citations to all the hashtags we edit. Simran made a good catch with noting that the tense of many articles is set in past tense, even though many of the hashtags are still live, and editorial board will definitely take that into consideration when editing! Thank you both for your feedback.

Aileenxgui (talk) 21:11, 19 March 2019 (UTC)

Emily's response: Simran- you make an excellent point on the distinction between a hashtag and a movement. To answer your question I think that generally, yes hashtags created or are indicative of movements. And thank you for pointing out the difference in tenses it is something I probably would not have caught otherwise.

Henry- I completely agree and want to add more content for the Women's March in 2017 and in 2018. The one concern I have is making it too long, which is why I chose to include links to the other pages which can better describe and contextualize each hashtag. I was also thinking of including links to the main article for not just our own hashtags that we are adding but to all the hashtags mentioned on the page. Thanks for your advice!

Emilygess (talk)23:20, 19 March 2019 (UTC)emilygess

Lulu's Response: Thank you so much for the feedback Simran: Totally forgot to include the links but that's a great suggestion especially because the original article does that already. Also good point to double check the tense as well as clarify whether it's just a hashtag or also a movement. Thank you Henry: We will definitely work on adding those links. I also think what you said about adding more context is a good point and we will work on that. And for protect our winters the references are in the references section, sorry for the confusion. We will make sure when we actually edit the article that it's clear where everything is. Thank you again!

Lulutao (talk) 03:26, 20 March 2019 (UTC)

Jeshua's Response: Thanks for the feedback Simran! We can definitely work on adding in links from hashtags to the wikipedia pages that they relate to. The tense issue is also an important one, we will have to discuss the use in the context of the prevalence of the hashtag in the current day, especially for older ones that may not be as popular now. Good looking out! Yes, I agree - there should be a uniform approach to defining just "hashtags" vs. the core movement etc., we will look into that.

Hey Henry, thank you! I do think some of the material needs more historical context, Women's March included. We will definitely work on getting our references for any of the parts that are missing them as we make our actual changes, appreciate the reminder. You and Simran both picked up on the linking issue, we will definitely fix it!

JeshuaKJohn (talk) 06:35, 20 March 2019 (UTC)

Henry's Review
I really like you guys' strategies on updating and adding new hashtags to the existing article. Please see below for my comments:
 * For #WomensMarch(under awareness), I think you can provide more historical context on the 2017 Women's march.
 * #ProtectOurWinters (under awareness), references are not provided underneath the description.
 * For all the movement hashtags, it would be great if you can provide a link to the main article. (#Me Too is a good example)

H.G. 05:04, 12 March 2019 (UTC)

Simran's Review
Hello Editorial board! This is my review on the edits you would like to make on the hashtag activism article. I like the idea of how you guys are adding in new hashtags and summaries of the hashtags! Maybe in the actual article, it would be a good idea to add links to the wikipedia articles related to the hashtags that you guys have mentioned. I noticed that the tense in the article is past tense (ex: "was a hashtag"). Considering most of these hashtags are still on the internet, consider maybe using present tense when referring to them. Also, some hashtags are referred to as 'hashtags' and others are referred to as movements. Have all of these hashtags created movements? This is just a clarifying question to ask yourself when deciding to call each individual hashtag a hashtag or a movement. Besides this, everything else looks good! Classikhgirl (talk) 03:31, 13 March 2019 (UTC)

Response to Peer Review
Simran- you make an excellent point on the distinction between a hashtag and a movement. To answer your question I think that generally, yes hashtags created or are indicative of movements. And thank you for pointing out the difference in tenses it is something I probably would not have caught otherwise.

Henry- I completely agree and want to add more content for the Women's March in 2017 and in 2018. The one concern I have is making it too long, which is why I chose to include links to the other pages which can better describe and contextualize each hashtag. I was also thinking of including links to the main article for not just our own hashtags that we are adding but to all the hashtags mentioned on the page. Thanks for your advice! Emilygess (talk) 23:20, 19 March 2019 (UTC)emilygess