User talk:LumpyDancer90

Concern regarding Draft:Paolo Ferri
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Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia. FireflyBot (talk) 21:03, 1 August 2022 (UTC)

Your draft article, Draft:Paolo Ferri


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Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. Liz Read! Talk! 21:16, 1 September 2022 (UTC)

Ways to improve Paolo Ferri
Hello, LumpyDancer90,

Thank you for creating Paolo Ferri.

I have tagged the page as having some issues to fix, as a part of our page curation process and note that:

"Please rewrite to meet guidelines, otherwise the article might be deleted."

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Ldm1954 (talk) 20:13, 29 January 2024 (UTC)


 * What exactly requires rewriting, where is this defined? The article mentions additional citations being required - for which sections? LumpyDancer90 (talk) 19:24, 30 January 2024 (UTC)
 * EVERYTHING needs rewriting:
 * His biography needs inline citations, not one at the top. You cannot use Linkedin
 * Each of his awards needs an independent source, again you cannot use Linkedin
 * The section on podcasts should be deleted. At most keep 2-4 as External Links at the end
 * The contributions to books section should be removed
 * Other projects has no relevance
 * The page should state facts with independent sources to verify, it is not a resume.
 * Ldm1954 (talk) 20:41, 30 January 2024 (UTC)
 * Thanks will updated in line with the above. LumpyDancer90 (talk) 21:20, 11 February 2024 (UTC)