User talk:LuriaDan

help me I am writing an article and would appreciate some thoughts on it. Link: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:LuriaDan/Draft_article_on_start_page

I am specifically looking for help on: 1. Scope (what should and shouldn't be included) 2. Good sources (I could only find 2 books on Internet/iGoogle), where else can I look?

Cheers,

-Dan.


 * It's a remarkable first effort, but I think you should take a look it WP:NOTGUIDE. Cheers! Kevin12xd (contribs) 23:45, 18 September 2013 (UTC)

Thanks Kevin, this helps a lot. I'll rewrite the draft based on this feedback.