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Children hospice does seem like a controversial topic so it might be a little hard to find neutral information but if you can then you should be fine as long s you state facts which in the parts you added you did so its a good start. You did state a reference so that is very important and try to find another source if you can to help you further develop this article. You do have the format of wikipedia writing down by paraphrasing and putting your reference at the end so if you keep it up like that you will do good.

When physician's have to decide that a child can no longer be medically cured, along with the parents a decision is made to end care keeping in mind the best interest of the child. When a decision between the parents and physicians cannot be reach, which is a very small percentage. The Physicians are then not obligated to provide any therapy care that the doctors have not deemed necessary towards the care goals of the child[1]

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the photo and additional detail under USA hospices is helpful to the article but what about inclusion of business ethics material? also, proofread for grammar (a few errors)  Micalva (talk) 01:34, 17 April 2019 (UTC)