User talk:Lvquanyang/sandbox

Peer Review
Hello Lvquanyang!

I see that you found some of the references that were necessary to add, excellent!

I think you could write an introductory paragraph under the section "Air Pollution" that contains a brief list of the pollutants that are going to be mentioned afterwards, because now the current text only mentions some of them. Therefore, you could adapt the following subsections according to the narrative that you want to incorporate in "Air pollution". Finally, I think the section "Coal" should be removed from "Pollutants", and moved elsewhere in the article.

Isolari (talk) 03:20, 25 April 2017 (UTC)

Hi!

I really like your article and all the statistics you found. I think they are great! I think it may be good if you could include what pollutants there are and their respective health effects. For example, I think PM10 is much worse than PM2.5 and their effects are much more severe. A short paragraph on how to know about these pollutants and prevent long term health effects mayu be good for example, buying masks or using air purifier.

Thank you Serene Tan — Preceding unsigned comment added by 128.2.149.36 (talk) 17:36, 25 April 2017 (UTC)