User talk:Lwareh1/sandbox

Copyedit an Article
Good job on your first assignment! Josef Horáček (talk) 20:47, 21 February 2018 (UTC)

Adding Sources
Your sandbox is well organized, and your sources are top notch and relevant to the article. This is especially important because you've chosen to edit an article on a medical topic. Go ahead and add the sources within a week. Josef Horáček (talk) 20:54, 3 March 2018 (UTC)


 * Good job. You're done! Josef Horáček (talk) 23:28, 28 April 2018 (UTC)

Adding a Lead to "History of Medical Cannabis"
This a great article to work on. Post a draft within a week. Josef Horáček (talk) 20:39, 1 April 2018 (UTC)


 * It's a good start. Here are some suggestions: 1. Ancient physicians - in what parts of the world? Or is it "in many parts of the world?" 2. Advancements in how the drug is administered - such as? 3. U.S. states - the number is much higher now, but the article doesn't mention that, so I guess no change is necessary here. 4. Most people who are prescribed marijuana - add "who are" to clarify confusing wording.


 * Make these changes and add the lead to the article. Josef Horáček (talk) 00:07, 23 April 2018 (UTC)


 * This lead came together very nicely. You really improved the article! Done with this assignment. Josef Horáček (talk) 23:23, 28 April 2018 (UTC)