User talk:Lwinfield

Citizens Uprooting Racism in Bermuda
I've put two tags on your article. The first is the 'unreferenced' tag - because you give no references at all. References from reliable independent sources are essential on Wikipedia - please see WP:RS. The other is the 'advert' tag - because your article reads like an advert. 'We' is not a word to use in an encyclopaedia, where articles are supposed to be 'about' and not 'by'. Look at WP:SPAM, and then at your article and do a bit of a rewrite in places. Avoid 'Mission' - unless you are an evangelising church sending out missionaries, of course. Any problems, contact me. Peridon (talk) 17:40, 1 September 2010 (UTC)

CURB
Wish I could undelete it. (I'm an editor, not an admin, and didn't delete it.) I was trying to delay deletion by putting the tags on so people would know something was going on. Looks like someone thought it was spammier than I did. The admin who did delete it would probably be able to do it, but I'd suggest putting it into your user space first. Go to your userpage (which doesn't exist yet), type in User:Lwinfield/CURB_draft and save. Then just click it and start your page again. Put at the very top, and let me know when it's ready to have a first look at. Peridon (talk) 18:37, 2 September 2010 (UTC)

CURB
Thanks Peridon - I'm new at this so will give it a go and let you know. I'm also a poet! Lwinfield (talk) 22:46, 2 September 2010 (UTC)

CURB
I've put a new draft on my user page and would be grateful if you could review and advise. Thanks
 * Looks way better. I've put the top tag right - it has to have the curly brackets and be lowercase. The refs would be in a reflist. I'll do it if you're not sure how. (I'm not either - I usually do a copy&paste from somewhere then fiddle till they look right!) 16:16, 4 September 2010 (UTC)

CURB
Hi Peridon, I think I've fixed it. Please could you take a look and let me know your thoughts. Thanks
 * Sorry - feeling rough. Will look again tomorrow at getting the refs into a list. If you want a go - see WP:CITE. Peridon (talk) 21:25, 5 September 2010 (UTC)

CURB
Hi Peridon, hope you're feeling better, and was hoping you might be able to look at the draft when you have a chance. Thanks Lwinfield (talk) 00:34, 10 September 2010 (UTC)
 * Sorry - been knocked flat by a chest infection. Happens most autumns. Draft looks good to me - but refs could do to be in a reflist. Have a look at WP:CITE. This is one of Wikipedia's clearer pages. Not. Will look again at it if you have trouble. (I always do - I copy & paste from somewhere and then paste in to change the relevant bits... Said that before. I'll learn how to do it properly some day.) Recovering a bit. (Just doing a rewrite of a playlet that's needed for casting on Tuesday...) Peridon (talk) 19:10, 12 September 2010 (UTC)
 * OK - have a look now. I've turned the refs into listed citations. Let me know what you think. There's more fancy ways of doing it, but for a small article this'll do. Peridon (talk) 17:56, 16 September 2010 (UTC)