User talk:Lwm1715/sandbox

In terms of formatting, have you considered using each particular drug or drug category (i.e. uppers vs downers?) as the section heads, and then listing the effects on sexual function, pleasure, and risk under each? Since several of the drugs are referenced multiple times, I feel this could possibly make the article more succinct. Just something to consider, the way you have it formatted now definitely fits more cleanly into the page as it.

In any case, the content itself is fantastic! The dimensions you're adding to this page are super relevant, since they address so much more than the original article does. If you're looking to add more, I think some examples of contraceptive and abortion drugs are warranted. Also maybe information about alcohol? It is the most commonly used drug apparently: https://www.rehabspot.com/alcohol/ (idk how solid this source is or not btw)

AlisterMcG (talk) 06:50, 6 November 2019 (UTC)

I think you provided most information on the article "Sex and Drugs", and adding information about various drugs on an article about drugs was a great idea. I think your edits are great, but here are my suggestions to improve it. Chintanpatel2634 (talk) 03:29, 7 November 2019 (UTC)
 * 1) I think you should add some more information about how people take cannabis to enhance their sexual experience, and what people usually thinks about cannabis and sex.
 * 2) I feel like you can reword the sentence in the Alcohol section. Also, I think you should add information about how people can't consent when they are drunk, and maybe information about alcohol and sex on college campuses.
 * 3) Other than that, other sections are pretty well written.
 * 4) I think the article is neutral, and all the information is supported by the claims.

Final wiki contribution comments: Overall good content added. There were typos and grammatical issues throughout that I edited directly in your page. One main thing I noticed is that you didn't really discuss how antidepressants, SSRIs in particular, can hurt sexual functioning. Nlegate (talk) 21:55, 9 December 2019 (UTC)