User talk:Lwm1715/talk page tutorial

Hello
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 * Hi! Can you give me any advice for improving this article?--Lwm1715 (talk) 21:03, 1 September 2019 (UTC)

What is the best way to paraphrase this? --Lwm1715 (talk) 21:04, 1 September 2019 (UTC)