User talk:Ly-So99/Feminist Perspectives on Sex Markets

I've created several locations where additional citations are required, and subheadings regarding the content that the article requires to be fleshed out. --Ly-So99 (talk) 05:01, 13 November 2019 (UTC)

The organization and structure of the article help clarify why you intend to go. I like how you plan on talking about the different types of feminism and the different geographic locations. Breaking down the topic this way helps clarify the complexity of the topic. One suggestion is to make sure each subsection is explained and connects to the overall topic. In the Lead you might want to clarify how the subsections connect to the overall topic. --Kayla H — Preceding unsigned comment added by Richie224 (talk • contribs) 16:36, 19 November 2019 (UTC)