User talk:LydBo/Gonatus onyx

Peer Review

 * I think the overall content is very good, however the wording can be a bit repetitive at times, with a few grammar mistakes.
 * I liked how descriptive the writing was, as it gives the reader a clear picture of what this species looked like. I also liked how the language was easy to understand for a person in a non science field to be able to grasp.
 * I think you have a great plan on where to go next, based on the notes sections included on the sandbox.
 * It looks as if you have a lot of credible sources that were used to obtain the information added.

Michaelbev5 (talk) 17:29, 25 March 2024 (UTC)


 * I agree with @Michaelbev5! The main thing I would focus on is re-organizing the page through the re-naming of headings and adding paragraph breaks and/or bolded subsections when discussing a new point or idea. --Jdx84 (talk) 17:34, 25 March 2024 (UTC)