User talk:Lyn Dunsavage Young

== Your submission at Articles for creation: Randy Thornhorn, American Novelist and Short Story Writer (August 6) ==  Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by LaMona was:

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LaMona (talk) 01:53, 6 August 2015 (UTC)

Welcome
Hello, Lyn Dunsavage Young, and welcome to Wikipedia. Thank you for your contributions. I hope you like the place and decide to stay. If you are stuck, and looking for help, please come to the Wikipedia Teahouse, where experienced Wikipedians can answer any queries you have! Or, you can just type   and your question on this page, and someone will show up shortly to answer. Here are a few good links for newcomers: We hope you enjoy editing here and being a Wikipedian! By the way, you can sign your name on talk and vote pages using four tildes, like this: &#126;&#126;&#126;&#126;. If you have any questions, see the help pages, add a question to the village pump or ask me on my talk page. Again, welcome! -- TRPoD aka The Red Pen of Doom  03:04, 8 September 2015 (UTC)
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Your draft article
Hello, your draft article has been moved to Draft:Randy Thornhorn. Please see this page for information on how to properly format references. Also note that book cover blurbs are not considered reliable sources, they are always clearly purely promotional and will not help establish that the subject meets the requirements of a stand alone article which requires third parties to have taken note .-- TRPoD aka The Red Pen of Doom  03:08, 8 September 2015 (UTC)

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&mdash;Skyllfully (talk &#124; contribs) 03:57, 8 September 2015 (UTC)

Your Article
I have succeeded in deleting the first copy of your article. However, I have not been able within time constraints to get it to an acceptable form. Your use of numbered footnotes, rather than letting Wikipedia do the numbering for you, is part but not all of the problem. I would suggest that you play The Wikipedia Adventure to get a little guided experience. I am having a lot of problems with your references, which are the hardest part of Wikipedia (in my view), and would suggest that you ask for help with them at the Teahouse, as well as for general advice on that article and for general advice. Robert McClenon (talk) 20:21, 10 September 2015 (UTC)

Welcome to The Wikipedia Adventure!

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-- 16:58, Saturday, September 12, 2015 (UTC)

Welcome to The Wikipedia Adventure!

 * Hi Lyn Dunsavage Young! We're so happy you wanted to play to learn, as a friendly and fun way to get into our community and mission.  I think these links might be helpful to you as you get started.
 * The Wikipedia Adventure Start Page
 * The Wikipedia Adventure Lounge
 * The Teahouse new editor help space
 * Wikipedia Help pages

-- 17:01, Saturday, September 12, 2015 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Randy Thornhorn (September 29)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by SwisterTwister was:

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.


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SwisterTwister  talk  23:16, 29 September 2015 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Randy Thornhorn (December 20)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by LaMona was:

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.


 * If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Randy Thornhorn and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
 * If you need any assistance, you can ask for help at the [//en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:WikiProject_Articles_for_creation/Help_desk&action=edit&section=new&nosummary=1&preload=Template:Afc_decline/HD_preload&preloadparams%5B%5D=Draft:Randy_Thornhorn Articles for creation help desk] or on the [//en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=User_talk:LaMona&action=edit&section=new&nosummary=1&preload=Template:Afc_decline/HD_preload&preloadparams%5B%5D=Draft:Randy_Thornhorn reviewer's talk page].
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LaMona (talk) 02:35, 20 December 2015 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Randy Thornhorn (March 6)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by 333-blue was:

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.


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333-blue 04:58, 6 March 2016 (UTC)