User talk:M.Carson.F.

I'm Mary Foerster and worked for Jim Albaugh at Boeing for 10 years. I've read the existing WP biography and am happy to help with any information requests or factual clarifications specific to Jim Albaugh and will provide proposed updates/ changes/corrections to the talk page first.18:44, 10 February 2015 (UTC)M.Carson.F. (talk)

Corrections/edits/updates to Jim Albaugh bio
I recently noticed sections of the page that could be expanded and include those below for consideration. I also am suggesting some verifiable updates to the article for consideration to help present Jim Albaugh's recent achievements in engineering and aerospace. I have tried to make these suggestions below consistent with other aerospace executive profiles on Wikipedia.

- Introductory section: add information about Jim's last few years at Boeing including the debut of the 787 Dreamliner and 747-8 jets and the establishment of a production site in Charleston, SC. This should also include his current positions. For example, he now serves as President, American Institute of Aeronautics and Astronautics and Chairman, National Aeronautic Association.

- Add "Early Life" section, typical of many bios in aerospace. This could include updates to Jim's hometown and education.

- Add "Early Work" section to include Jim's experience prior to Boeing, including project engineer at Rockwell and as president, Rocketdyne when the company's aerospace and defense businesses were acquired by Boeing in 1997. This section could also include the major role Jim played in integrating various defense and space companies acquired by Boeing and expanding that business internationally.

-To "Current Work" section, make corrections to the original paragraph, for example his role as senior adviser to the Blackstone Group.

-"Awards and Recognition" section could include updated information about his election to the National Academy of Engineering and other recent awards.18:15, 20 February 2015 (UTC)18:15, 20 February 2015 (UTC)18:15, 20 February 2015 (UTC)18:15, 20 February 2015 (UTC) — Preceding unsigned comment added by 24.17.231.148 (talk)