User talk:M.hassett99/sandbox

R.McGee (talk) 22:10, 6 October 2015 (UTC) Adding more citation to the actual text would help serve to make the article more substantial and more well supported. The image and it's citation are a big help in showing just what is being talked about, but it is a blast of color and the size draws the readers eye away from the text, which looks small in comparison, so maybe shift the image so it is better surrounded by text. A section that talks about background or reasoning behind this project also seems like it would serve to create a more well rounded article.