User talk:M2le/sandbox

Hi Michelle, great job already adding to the topic page. Now, I see Professor Hertz commented on the TritonEd discussion board that the third source you posted isn't easily reading as academic. I would also add that I'm not quite sure what exactly you're adding to the subsection overall. Are you adding sections discussion different Presidential engagements with affirmative actions through executive orders? If so, perhaps a general scholarly search engine, such as Google scholar, would be helpful in creating more information from academic sources that you could extract from. --Hishaikh (talk) 18:08, 6 November 2018 (UTC)Hina

Thank you for your feedback. I wanted to add a source that would give credence to one of the statements that surrounded the Reagan's Admin. If that does not work. please let me know. I am attempting to add two pages to the article in order to clarify dead links such as the executive orders. Do you want me to re-organize the entire article or edit sections on executive orders? --M2le (talk) 20:16, 11 November 2018 (UTC)

I am also seeking to add citations to sections that need it. --M2le (talk) 20:21, 11 November 2018 (UTC)

I would like to change my topic to a biography of George M. Fredrickson. Please let me know if it will be approved. I will send an email to Professor Hertz. --M2le (talk) 17:41, 12 November 2018 (UTC)

Comments on topic
Hi Michelle,

The new article you've chosen looks great! Make sure to add sources and citations to every claim or fact you put on the page. Also, is the further readings section referencing another academic article you're referencing? If so, that would definitely successfully complete the three academic article requirement. Hishaikh (talk) 20:51, 15 November 2018 (UTC)Hina

I re-did the list. Please let me know if need to add anything else, thank you. --M2le (talk) 17:39, 21 November 2018 (UTC)