User talk:MGMT90018 2015S2 EmployeeEngagement/sandbox

Initially we will begin with drafting our own sections for the articles. Make sure your references are in Harvard format please Jaimie Mazur 542401

Hey all, I've started putting together my section in word. I'll put up my initial draft tomorrow morning so you can have a look. 539916MGMT (talk) 00:10, 13 September 2015 (UTC)

Also I think we should get rid of the pop culture references section. What do you guys think? 539916MGMT (talk) 00:12, 13 September 2015 (UTC)
 * I agree with deleting that section 542401MGMT (talk) 01:54, 14 September 2015 (UTC)

Also have a think and see if there are any better photos that we can use for the wiki page! 539916MGMT (talk) 00:15, 13 September 2015 (UTC)

I have deleted the pop culture references. Is the further readings section required as well? 539916MGMT (talk) 09:37, 13 September 2015 (UTC)

I have edited the “what is employee engagement” section the “Definitions” section, and the “commitment section"542401MGMT (talk) 01:52, 14 September 2015 (UTC)

I have added in my initial draft for the implications section, however I need to add more content to this. We might need to add in some more sections by the way, depending on how much Chen and Tian write. 539916MGMT (talk) 01:56, 14 September 2015 (UTC)

I think we should get rid of the further reading section - thoughts? 542401MGMT (talk) 04:23, 14 September 2015 (UTC)
 * Sounds like a good idea - I'll get rid of it now.539916MGMT (talk) 05:52, 14 September 2015 (UTC)

I also think there's going to be a lot of overlap between "generating employee engagement" and "implications". I'll look at restructuring the parts after class.539916MGMT (talk) 05:52, 14 September 2015 (UTC)

Tian - In regards to your section the lecturer doesn't want an opinion type piece he wants causes of employee engagement e.g. retention, absenteeism, job satisfaction, the work itself. Can you look into that please - Herzberg is a great reference. Basically he said that "that is exactly what we don't want" in relation to that section. :/ 542401MGMT (talk) 06:48, 14 September 2015 (UTC)
 * Tian - I'm adding in some information that we discussed during class. I'll put it up later tonight - let me know what you think! 539916MGMT (talk) 09:44, 14 September 2015 (UTC)

Hi Chen - Nice start on the benefits section. I think you need to expand on your points there - there isn't much information there and we need to make sure we meet the word count. Would you be able to look at revising your section? Let me know if you need any help with it. Thanks! 539916MGMT (talk) 08:06, 15 September 2015 (UTC)

Hi all, I've reformatted the 'Causes' section based on the lecturer's suggestions. The wording is pretty rough - I'm going to look at refining it later tonight. Let me know if you have any further suggestions for this section! 539916MGMT (talk) 08:32, 15 September 2015 (UTC)
 * Also Tian your original work is saved in my sandbox, just in case we need to refer to it again 539916MGMT (talk) 08:34, 15 September 2015 (UTC)
 * Annie I have also added to and edited the causes section 542401MGMT (talk) 02:32, 17 September 2015 (UTC)

Hi all, I'm going to look at adding a "measurements" section this afternoon, considering that we're under the word count a fair bit. Please have a look at extending your sections! 539916MGMT (talk) 00:09, 20 September 2015 (UTC)

Also I'm not sure who put the random references at the bottom of the page, but would you please be able to convert them into the proper wiki format? Thanks! :) 539916MGMT (talk) 02:20, 20 September 2015 (UTC)

I've added more to everyones sections, let me know how you are going and if you need me to check over your work or add more stuff 542401MGMT (talk) 05:45, 20 September 2015 (UTC)

I've just completed a major edit of all of the sections. I think that we should also look at putting the contributors section under consequences, as it's doubling up on information. Also who is adding to the measurement section? 539916MGMT (talk) 00:23, 21 September 2015 (UTC)

Annie I am going to edit the consequences section - I am going to make it factually based and include evidence and the appropriate references. As we know we CANNOT put in opinionated pieces or original pieces (that use our own opinion) so I will be editing that. Annie will you please edit the definitions and other designated section. Once we have completed that we can do an edit of the rest of the article. 542401MGMT (talk) 12:52, 21 September 2015 (UTC)
 * Sounds good. I'll also see if I can dig up some more theory for the causes section. I apologise if there is anything I have written that isn't neutral. When we do an edit of the article we also need to check the referencing, it's quite messy. 539916MGMT (talk) 12:55, 21 September 2015 (UTC)
 * I am currently editing the referencing now542401MGMT (talk) 13:45, 21 September 2015 (UTC)

I have finished fixing our referencing so it's compliant with Wikipedia's rules. 539916MGMT (talk) 08:56, 23 September 2015 (UTC)

I have edited the page based on the turnitin report provided by our lecturer. Jaimie is to edit the introduction and definition to reduce the plagiarism levels.539916MGMT (talk) 02:30, 24 September 2015 (UTC)
 * currently fixing it up now - who did the definitions section? It's completely copied and pasted?542401MGMT (talk) 09:57, 24 September 2015 (UTC)
 * it's taken from the original wikipedia page, i just had a quick look 539916MGMT (talk) 21:28, 24 September 2015 (UTC)

Assignment is submitted. Thanks for all of your work guys 539916MGMT (talk) 21:38, 24 September 2015 (UTC)