User talk:MJaffee16

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I noticed that one of the first articles you edited appears to be dealing with a topic with which you may have a conflict of interest. In other words, you may find it difficult to write about that topic in a neutral and objective way, because you are, work for, or represent, the subject of that article.&#32;Your recent contributions may have already been undone for this very reason.

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I hope you enjoy editing here and being a Wikipedian! Please sign your messages on talk pages using four tildes ( ~ ); this will automatically insert your username and the date. If you need help, check out Questions, ask me on my talk page, or ask your question on this page and then place  before the question. Again, welcome! Drmies (talk) 22:41, 10 July 2017 (UTC)

Hi Drmies! Thank you for your feedback. This is the first time I have edited a Wikipedia page, and I really want to make sure that I understand where I can improve for future page edits! I have also conducted quite a bit of research on Lauren and want to make sure that the information I found is used in any way it can be to improve the biography. Can you explain why you felt that this was written in an unacceptable format, and additionally, if there is any way that we can work collaboratively so that I can understand the correct format of the page edit? I would truly appreciate your help!

Best,

MJaffee16 (talk) 18:13, 11 July 2017 (UTC)MJaffee16
 * What's going on in here is not research, it's resume-writing. Content for articles needs to be verified by secondary sources, and most of what you added has only primary sourcing, and it needs to be written neutrally--"Following her passion to address inequality by building relationships, bringing up communities, and using public policy to spark action,..." is not neutral. Please see WP:RS and WP:NPOV. Moreover, there's a likely conflict of interest since I have no doubt you are the same editor whose User:WFCO account was blocked 25 minutes before you started this account. You were being thrown to the wolves by your boss, and that's not fair to you, but that's not something I can help. If you want to be a Wikipedia editor, go edit Wikipedia--follow the links, do the training modules, help the world to free knowledge. If you have to plug your organization's president via Wikipedia, you'll have to be like a Wikipedia editor first. Good luck, Drmies (talk) 19:32, 11 July 2017 (UTC)