User talk:MLSchiffler/sandbox

Feedback
Nice work on your draft. I fixed the formatting with your section headers. The only thing you need to do is to make sure that every statement can be connected directly with the source that supports it. Right now you have several sentences that don't have a reference after them, so you need to fix that. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 21:52, 29 April 2019 (UTC)

Fixes
I think I fixed the citations you were referring to. If I am missing some still, let me know and I'll fix them right away. Thank you for your help!

MLSchiffler (talk) 03:14, 30 April 2019 (UTC)


 * Thanks for making those changes. If you need to ping me, please use "Ian (Wiki Ed)" rather than just "Ian" (who's an entirely different Wikipedian who's probably a bit puzzled by your ping :) Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 20:09, 2 May 2019 (UTC)