User talk:MLoson20/sandbox

Peer Review from Kaleena
Upon reviewing your article I like the change you made, **Rwanda Genocide is probably something to remove - It has it's own article 'Rwandan Genocide'** If it has its own article I don't feel like there is a reason to include it, however if it is relevant in any way to your article you could give a brief rundown of topic and then refer the reader to the additional article for more information if needed. I seen your response to the title! I do have to say I did laugh a bit when I started reading your talk page and noticed you mentioned the misspelling of the title. The most important piece of information I see lacking in the article is information on the "Gold Coast." I would resort to resources specifically on the Gold Coast and add pertinent details about it. I think you have a great article to work with as the changes that need to be made are clear. I will have to double check the spelling of words in my article, not sure I would have caught the title misspelling without you pointing that out! HISTORYLEARNER2018 (talk) 14:27, 19 April 2018 (UTC)

Thanks Kaleena - Appreciate the feedback.

Writing a section on the Gold Coast (Ghana) was certainly important, because they were the first "black" African territory to gain their independence. I also decided that the "Difficulties with transition" section didn't truly fit this article, so my article replaced it.

Peer review from Christian
Hey there! I took a peek at your outline so far and it seems pretty solid! One thing I did notice is that in the sentence "This allowed for African nationalist to negotiate decolonization very quickly and with minimal casualties." It would seem you meant for it to say African *nationalists* instead of using the singular form. Other than that it seems like a great start, good luck with the rest! ChristianDelano (talk) 01:12, 21 April 2018 (UTC)

Thanks Christian -- I'll double-check spelling and grammar issues. — Preceding unsigned comment added by MLoson20 (talk • contribs) 01:03, 12 May 2018 (UTC)