User talk:MNC-2016/Male prostitution/Jcrg34 Peer Review

edits

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

MNC-2016


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:MNC-2016/Male_prostitution?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Male prostitution

Evaluate the drafted changes[edit]
So in the edit that was posted a lot of it had to do with our class work which I thought worked well. But the second paragraph in the edit phase seems a little unnessary since some of the facts are uncited. For example it says "The rates of HIV/AIDS and other sexually transmitted infections are high in some Caribbean and African countries which are popular destinations for female sex tourism." which is not really relevant and also is not sourced. Most of the citations you have are from Latin American countries and sources but in the edits Latin America is not even mentioned. I think in the online page could mention the legal passage of FOSTA (Fight Online Sex Trafficking Act) and SESTA (Stop Enabling Sex Traffickers Act). I also think in popular culture you could talk about the 2022 remake of the movie American Gigalo. Jcrg34 (talk) 19:59, 29 September 2022 (UTC)