User talk:MSherman/sandbox

One of the articles I would like to tackle is the article about recidivism. It is missing some major points on causes, use of programs and how successful the programs are. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Recidivism#Causes The other article I would like to tackle is the article about Cinderella. I feel it could be more informational if it could include information about gender roles and a deeper meaning, it could include more world views on it. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Cinderella MSherman (talk) 03:29, 15 October 2017 (UTC)

Topic Choice
Replace the header with your topic choice and add the content from the existing page here. Mosterbur (talk) 00:22, 28 October 2017 (UTC)Mosterbur

Feedback on Progress
This is a good start with regard to establishing an introduction to the page and finding good sources. What I would like to see you do prior to Tuesday is build on your outline and continue to add more sources.

Mosterbur (talk) 15:09, 19 November 2017 (UTC)Mosterbur

Peer Review
Megan ~ I think that you have a great start to your article I defiantly recommend that you add more and I would also recommend pictures of what the inside of the jails in Norway look like but over all you have a good start and in the end I think it will be a great article --ATetr (talk) 03:02, 20 November 2017 (UTC)