User talk:MVPBanks1207

Your submission at Articles for creation: Thomas McMakin (November 17)
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~WikiOriginal-9~ ( talk ) 23:49, 17 November 2023 (UTC)

Speedy deletion nomination of Draft:Thomas McMakin


A tag has been placed on Draft:Thomas McMakin, requesting that it be speedily deleted from Wikipedia. This has been done under section G11 of the criteria for speedy deletion, because the page seems to be unambiguous advertising which only promotes a company, group, product, service, person, or point of view and would need to be fundamentally rewritten in order to become encyclopedic. Please read the guidelines on spam and FAQ/Organizations for more information.

If you think this page should not be deleted for this reason, you may contest the nomination by visiting the page and clicking the button labelled "Contest this speedy deletion". This will give you the opportunity to explain why you believe the page should not be deleted. However, be aware that once a page is tagged for speedy deletion, it may be deleted without delay. Please do not remove the speedy deletion tag from the page yourself, but do not hesitate to add information in line with Wikipedia's policies and guidelines. If the page is deleted, and you wish to retrieve the deleted material for future reference or improvement, then please contact the. AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 23:59, 17 November 2023 (UTC)

Paid editing disclosure
Your paid editing disclosure is incomplete. "None yet" is not acceptable. Presumably, the client hired you to work on something in particular&mdash;if that's so, you must state what it is, even if you haven't written about it yet. Secondly, if "Greg Moore" works for some organization and is paying you on their behalf, you need to list the name of the organization, not the individual, responsible for paying you. And if they're paying you on some other third party's behalf, that is the "affiliation", and you must disclose that as well. Please correct these issues prior to making any more edits. Seraphimblade Talk to me 03:00, 18 November 2023 (UTC)