User talk:M holleb

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Hello, M holleb, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Elysia and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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feedback on Nancy Tuchman
Hi M holleb, thanks for creating Nancy Tuchman! The body of the article is pretty good, but can you go through the lead and make sure your word choice is as neutral as possible? Wikipedia articles should be written with a neutral point of view, but some of your word choice does not come across as neutral. Examples are when you mention "her dedication" or that she "is celebrated". Try to stick to just the facts. The reader should not be able to guess what the writer of the article thinks about the subject. Thanks, Elysia (Wiki Ed) (talk) 20:30, 20 November 2018 (UTC)