User talk:M holleb/sandbox

Becca's comments
change "functions" to "function" change "as an Aquatic Ecologist her research focuses on three areas of impact on Great Lake coastal ecosystems" to "with a focus on coastal Great Lake ecosystems" change "Chicagoland" to "Chicago"

early life & education she was raised to love the outdoors or with a love of the outdoors Change "masters" to Master of Science or M.S.

delete the sentence that starts with " after graduating she found..."

change: Returning from NSF, Loyola administers asked her to serve in administration to serve as Associate Provost for Research and Centers. This position gave Nancy headway for the discussion and proposing of the idea to make a more energy efficient and sustainable campus and ultimately establish the Institute of Environmental Sustainability.

to - she returned to Loyola as Associate Provost for Research and Centers. This position gave...

i would move her research focus above the part where she goes to NSF and then becomes Associate Provost

publications - include journals

great job!